Tuesday 3 February 2015

Feedback - Double Page Spread


My teacher has assessed my double page spread in numerous ways. He has graded my work entirely in the level 4 section. Level 4 would equate to Grade A/B.

A strength of my assessment was that I had used great conventions and a good image use. He also added that my magazine had a clear representation.

Areas to improve included moving my pull quote so that it would be more noticeable and easier for my audience to read and to possibly add a box entailing Elijah's new album.

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